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Atlantis 47 by warrior-oji Atlantis 47 by warrior-oji
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A stray stone is pushed with a violent current from within the thick cloud, shining, piercing the head of the fated and unfortunate, Lazule rears back writhing with a cruel howl. His irises stolen turn an electric blue shade as the energy within the power crystal eats at him. Assigned its master it shimmers as if on command, the unwanted crown.
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It begins!
Cue the Ecco scream sfx. XDDD
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TUT …I had no other idea how to get this part done.
;U; This is probably the part everyone has been waiting for, wondering how Laz happens to gain a horn. And the part I dread > retarded. ;u;
It was amongst the rubble and debris, pushed out by pressure of air bubbles trapped etc. :/ That’s my logix, pfft.

It just, sorta happens without good visual drawn idea of WHERE and HOW. XD
The blood begins to clear from the water at the same time. :) As if blown away/change of scene.
Love-hate page, lol kinda this whole chapter really. Entirely is baaaad.

:bulletgreen:GOOD POINTS:
Panel 2, impact is rather nice… and horrifically painful looking-going on panel 3.
Water colour change <3
:’c My font-text decided to look nice when I resized it right…somehow.
Panel 3 somehow turned out rather nice. C:
Phins are better drawn, sorta. :p panel 3 is wonky pfft.
Bloody spurt + lighting of crystal. I like the bursting light fx coming from the crystal panel 3 and how it drags in the water with the movement of Lazule rolling in agony, frothy bubbles included

:bulletred:BAD POINTS:
I dislike panel 1. Nice idea and angle, dumbly drawn/painted, specifically the shiny blue …shinies. Lol, aura.
Panel 2, Laz is kinda dorky-bad.
Badly executed panel 3, speechy bubble over character- no no. XD but not too bad.
Not enough motion in his writhing body.
XD the crystal size is way too short compared to future, lol. Should be longer XD
The eye marking-static haunts me later as a bad idea 8C fffffffff. Super noob crap!
SFX ew!
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Atlantis © Warrior-Oji
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Psh, I see that happening all the time on animal planet XD DOLPHINS GETTING SHARP OBJECTS STUCK INTO THEIR HEADS AND THEN BECOMING A PART OF THE NARWHAL FAMILY! XD LOL

Looking very good can't wait to see what happens next :stare:

LET THERE BE JOY AND SINGING AND SHARP OBJECTS FLYING! :D
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warrior-oji Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D: LMAO! I should hope not and that it was a joke. XD
HE WAS DESTINED TO BE A NARWHAL!

<3 Thank much! ;Db

LMFAO! X'D There will be songs aplenty, joys and sorrow... and stabby time! >:3 hurhurr.
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It was a joke ;A; I swear! LOL XD
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warrior-oji Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X'D Stabby time will appear soon. ouob
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Moo:mwhahahaha! *rubs fins together* I seen there has been a lack of stabbing, I must correct this! C:<

XD LOL
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warrior-oji Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lazule: Aw hell no, that's my future role. >:c Lets team up!

X'D FFFFFFFFFFFFFF
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Moo: *eyes Lazule*...hmmm, well I suppose. BUT DO NOT FAIL ME!

XD
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warrior-oji Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lazule: I WAS BORN FOR GREATNESS! *Thrusts horn in face* THE VOICES IN MY HEAD SAY SO.
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D-Thessy Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
ZAS In all your face!!! :iconcoffeetardplz: LOL
Now try to sing this song [link] but with this lyric:
"Narwhal, narwhal, now Lazule is a narwhal..." XDDDD
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warrior-oji Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zas?
XDDDDDDD LMFAO! That song I've known for ages, now I can enjoy it. :giggle:
You'll see some jokes later on it, nothing too great.

u3u To me, my baby has always been a narwhal.
Thanks!
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