A stray stone is pushed with a violent current from within the thick cloud, shining, piercing the head of the fated and unfortunate, Lazule rears back writhing with a cruel howl. His irises stolen turn an electric blue shade as the energy within the power crystal eats at him. Assigned its master it shimmers as if on command, the unwanted crown.
Cue the Ecco scream sfx. XDDD
TUT …I had no other idea how to get this part done.
;U; This is probably the part everyone has been waiting for, wondering how Laz happens to gain a horn.
And the part I dread > retarded. ;u;
It was amongst the rubble and debris, pushed out by pressure of air bubbles trapped etc. :/ That’s my logix, pfft.
It just, sorta happens without good visual drawn idea of WHERE and HOW. XD
The blood begins to clear from the water at the same time.
As if blown away/change of scene.
Love-hate page, lol kinda this whole chapter really. Entirely is baaaad.
Panel 2, impact is rather nice… and horrifically painful looking-going on panel 3.
Water colour change <3
:’c My font-text decided to look nice when I resized it right…somehow.
Panel 3 somehow turned out rather nice. C:
Phins are better drawn,
sorta. panel 3 is wonky pfft.
Bloody spurt + lighting of crystal.
I like the bursting light fx coming from the crystal panel 3 and how it drags in the water with the movement of Lazule rolling in agony, frothy bubbles included
I dislike panel 1. Nice idea and angle, dumbly drawn/painted, specifically the shiny blue …shinies. Lol, aura.
Panel 2, Laz is kinda dorky-bad.
Badly executed panel 3, speechy bubble over character- no no. XD but not too bad.
Not enough motion in his writhing body.
XD the crystal size is way too short compared to future, lol. Should be longer XD
The eye marking-static haunts me later as a bad idea 8C fffffffff. Super noob crap!
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