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Atlantis 48 by warrior-oji Atlantis 48 by warrior-oji
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Whisked away by a bodiless voice the dolphin stays frozen in motion as blue covers his vision, searing pain mingling harmoniously. The words are gentle and strong, coil majestically and whisper to him of things he does not comprehend, the siren demanding as it fades as fast as it has appeared.
Jem, lost within the frenzy has found him and comes to his side, she cannot see that Lazule is still listless to her urgent song and her pleas fall on deaf ears. The news she has to relay is not received, tears fall heavy with anguish, as her pod mate is giving no signal…
From within the haze Lazule can see her but is unable to respond, light dances within his sight, and strange blue marks wrap themselves around the female in a twisted distortion, who flails desperately before him. Her song drowned out by the buzzing of his head.
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“This is your 1st test. BRAVERY.
Defend thy kin.
If he is your brother…
prove to us how much he means to you.”

…Wow that’s kinda cruel. Thanks blue voice.

YAY! Stuff be happening. ;B
Jem kinda just appears, yeah. :I shhhhh. After she vanished lamely and we never saw a peep from her the entire action scene, lol. I am bad planner XD more of said planning at the end of comic.

:’C sorry if the text is unreadable. :/ derp. I still don’t mind though, leaves it hard to read as Lazule hears it waver. Hahah evil fun/mystery fail. I know it should be readable really, halps with story yes. So I failed truthfully, lol.

Blue orbs to show Laz is kinda having a good time in pain land and half not his own sea. C: I shall say no more.

:bulletgreen:GOOD POINTS:
Crystal finally does something. Ohh and I like how it fits into the panel, standing out.
Jem in the last panel and the read sea of horrors <3
:bulletred:BAD POINTS:
The eye effect is so grossly noob ;n; but OTL I even redid it because it was just THAT ugly before. XD
the blue specks are nice, but could be better.
OTL Laz kinda blanks in/out/unconscious because the crystal, again next page, fluctuating consciousness :T but I didn’t mention that too well.
You guys won’t find this page a bore I know, but not much is happening, lacking dynamics. XD plah!
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Atlantis © Warrior-Oji
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Duzloo Oct 1, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Poor Jem :(
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warrior-oji Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:C Hugs for all the little squishy dolphins.
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Duzloo Oct 2, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Yes. :/
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Sep 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
J-Jazz... DEAD.... I will seek VENGENCE!!!!!! God, how did i knew he was gonna die? That's magic o3o But....
WHY OJI! WHY!!!!????? Why him not... uhm.... THE WEED!?

Blue light! you will be missed, Jazz
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warrior-oji Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
/: I woulda thought more would catch on. ... >u> I ain't spolin it.
:T It's not science to know he'd die. lol. Cliche maybe

I did it so that the epic story could really begin, something tragic to set off the horrible mechanics within. He is a cog in the beginning, but also my cherished lil commy. Not a nobody.
An artist must do anything for a good story, that's why they are good, they impact.
/: Having a soppy happy ending is weak-unrealistic, and I hate the sorts.

XD WEED?
Blue light??
Of course my darlin is missed. c':

TY.
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Sep 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well i hope he will come back somehow he was so... fat... o2o
Oh yah, some people do that :D I hate deaths >:I mostly becouse there's a death in every year of my life, alway's a relative
Happy endings are for children, the world is full of dark and light colors.

Yah know the weed that trolled Laz :icondivaplz:
From the horn :D

NP
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warrior-oji Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;T I cannot say. Lol, he wasn't fat, just pudgy and his build, short.
I love seeing deaths. They tear at my heart, and I don't care.
:T I dunno many people, so I don't experience that much pain. I've had enough to accept it better, or block it.
LOL. I like darkness.

XD
From the horn?
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Sep 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
He was so stufed o3o Well people are deferent so yah, deaths are wonderful and terible
Mostly my mom's relatives (lots and lots of cousins XD)
I said the line of the world froma text we had to write to our lithuanian class teacher XD

Yeeup
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warrior-oji Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He wasn't, lol. Just natural anatomy.
D: AW!

O3O
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Sep 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
o3O
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