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Bellowing suddenly the shark tosses its large head as he is injured from line of sight, the trophy catch spat from his mouth messily and eyes tear behind him losing their fire.
Seething with pent up feelings and overload Lazule is blind to everything but the shark now as he intends to slice him to bits or gore with his newfound weapon. The will to live and protect stronger than the fish’s urge to survive and eat, he warningly growls, the aggressors’ own blood seeping from the blade. Light hitting the mammals eye seems to crackle with such forceful energy that the ocean lord backs off as fear tingles up spine and sneaks into sensors, finally waking him up.
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TUT this page is so poorly draw/portrayed. It looks like laz has a Sue-rage mode. Ugh!
:c It’s meant to be tunnel vision aggressiveness, and he’s kinda out of it as the crystals messing him up. :T I can see everyone “oh, rage mode!” Naw, I cannot draw a flash streak in his eyes as they glaze over for a split second, have to animate that. So settle for blanks.
The shark backs off after realizing this guy isn’t going to 1st. The will to live/protect is stronger than his own. |D after all he’s been through too, lol.

STAB DAT SHARK LAZ! 8U

GOOD POINTS:
|C I change my mind constantly about Laz in 2nd panel :/ he seems ok, but the eyes ffff.
Bottom shark’s alright. :T
Blue speed lines in panel 2 are nice.
Although a tad nooby, bloody crystal ftw! :3 stab stab stab
The charged bubbles and sea water <3

More bloody goodness^^

BAD POINTS:
Eye close up with static water webbing. Ew
Top shark, blah!
Lighting is poor.
Page is meh bad layout.
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~BugsBunnyFanNo1 Nov 17, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Mr. Shark, stop yealing at Jazz's tail~!
WoW, what's with the blood coming from the crystal D: Dangit, his eyes are beautiful

Neon red-purple bubble o3o

~warrior-oji Nov 17, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

LOL. Spittle growl. XD
Laz stabbed the shark, silly. XD Match it up with panel 1. :I
:U Laz eyes?

They're certainly not neon, just glowy. Neon is bright colours that hurt the eyes. XD

TY.

~BugsBunnyFanNo1 Nov 17, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Ooooooh, that makes sence now

And yes, Laz's eyes

There so kawaii DX i can't, i wanna glomp them LoL

NP

~warrior-oji Nov 17, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Blah,laz's eyes are pale white-blue.
Purple would be the blight hitting his eye through blood.

XD WHAT??? Glomp wat?

~BugsBunnyFanNo1 Nov 17, 2012 Student Digital Artist

They glow 0o0

The bubbles XD

~warrior-oji Nov 17, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

With a sorta energy/aura yes.

~BugsBunnyFanNo1 Nov 17, 2012 Student Digital Artist

:')

~Duzloo Nov 16, 2012 Student Interface Designer

Laz: Grrrrrrrrrr!

His eyes seem indeed off. I think it's the point of view, dolphins from the front aren't easy.

~warrior-oji Nov 17, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

~~"Yeah, you back offa my bitches. Imma rape you with my crystal dagger!" So wrong. 8D~~

XD I only meant the whiteness, not the derpy shape of him. XD OLD ART. They're much easier now :/ Mostly realism.

TY.

~Duzloo Nov 17, 2012 Student Interface Designer

Haha, I would have really lots of trouble with this perspective!

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